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wonderful

"loved it. shows how poly love can be with jealousy and just pure love. "

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Her saviors Her doms

"First of all I dislike being forced to leave a review. This makes me reconsider even opening this app. I don't mind rating as much, but i don't like being forced to write. Book is decent. "

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Really good

"Really good xxxx"

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Destiny

"Everything is great but everywhere repetition of the same scenario may spoil the reader's mind"

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Her Saviours/Her Doms

"Like: -the storyline -The characters Dislike: -when people speak, it would be nice nice if you would put these: „“ before and after -how sentences are connected "

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Her Saviors / Her Doms

"Overall I liked the plot. I think you should add atleast anothor chapter explaining how lif is going with twins. I would honestly love to see maybe a second book of this, but I do know how much time and energy writting bookes take out of you. I loved the part where you had the "daddy" punish her with the cat of 9 tails with 15 whacks and how they spent the time together to try to forgive her. Right now I am a switch, but am in a relationship where I am the dom. It takes alot out of you emotionally and sometimes physically, but you need to put your submissive first and think of what could go wrong with the worst case happens. I have made a few errors but you have to make sure you don't emotionally scar them or hurt them badly and hope that they forgive. "

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This story is intense and I love it. ❤

"I like the intense emotions that are provoked in this story. It brings smiles, tears and even laughter."

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Her Saviors, Her Doms

"You did a good job writing this book. It was very detailed but it was a little too fast paced. I would have liked to see more from their times at the club. "

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Her Doms

"💛💛💛💛💛 Good Story 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤"

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Avid reader

"Oh I want 2 doms. Yum. So good story so far. "

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Love it

"Great story"

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Its nice

"I haven't found something like this and it is way beautifully presented, I just loved it ."

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Great book

"Awesome book for your first time writing. Great job. The only thing I would like to see is some interaction between Destiny and her friends, as you say in the beginning they are all subs. Or maybe more books with those friends ;) "

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Love it

"Really like ur book "

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Destiny and her Doms a Review

"Though I do not read many stories along this line, I found this one to be well thought out with some great details and descriptions. For a first time writer I would say you have done and excellent job, and I feel the you will have some Brilliant ideas once you have a few more stories written. Please keep it up ! "

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Her savor her doms

"I was very happy with this story it got my attention right from the start and kept me interested right til the end. I would recommend it to anyone i knew who was into these types of stories"

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Has Potential

"As a fellow writer I could suggest an edit, edit it especially areas like in dialogue it confuses who is saying what. Also Paragraphs make them shorter. Punctuation as well. Over all the story plot is good and has potential, just to reconstruct everything again. It's pure edits. Description is well, but more about the characters would be best. Keep it up, it's a real good story, really."

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Her saviour /her dom

"I think it was cool check the grammar. But awesome."

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Her saviors/ Doms

"I loved the ending of the book. No grammar mistakes to my knowledge. Writing style was interesting. Overall I enjoyed the book "

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her saviors/her doms

"I enjoyed the story It was exactly the type of story I wanted to read However, it sounded like a child was telling it, not an adult. It waa too general in most of the descriptions and too often lacked details where better detailing would have made a better and more errotic story. I liked the happy ending and how you included the contract. A sequel that was better written, and included how the three way marriage changes the contract, along with having children would be of interest. "

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