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WHO RAISED US WITH PRIDE

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Summary

fatherhood is linked to better outcomes on nearly every measure of child wellbeing, from cognitive development and educational achievement to self-esteem and pro-social behavior. There is no limit of words to describe the most important person in our life , our FATHER , some call him dad ! A small tribute to our father from thier dearest daughter 💓 Spare time ? Use it for reading my work . And if you like it so please leave a comment or review! Sahre it your dad ❤️✨ Thank you 😊

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
4.7 3 reviews
Age Rating
13+

WHO RAISED US WITH PRIDE

So after writing so many times

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and clicking on backspace for hundred times,

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finally i tried my best , to thank you !

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for all of your love and sacrifice you do.

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from the day i was born,

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u are my unicorn.

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those arms who cover me,

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those fingers who hold me.

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your beautiful lullababies,

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to whom i listen even after infancy.

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you have not made a day without father,

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you know without you everything bother.

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those non stop jokes you crack,

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we laugh together , even if the humour lack.

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apart from laughs , you know my emotions,

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you are busy being a clown , when i cry oceans.

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whenever my mistakes, converts to your fault,

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mom keeps all our plans at halt,

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but we enjoy them on time,

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and hence we are partner in crime.

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you didnt taught me , whats right or wrong,

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you made me realize about it.

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you wanted me to be independent , not depended lifelong,

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you encouraged me to explore,

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my skills , my talent and much more.

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our bond is really different,

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you are more of a bestfried to me , rather than just being a parent.

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everyone say i look like you,

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a smaller girlier version of you.

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this 18 yrs spent with you,

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are golden memories of mine with you.

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this is what i want to say,

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and also i pray everyday .

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that i keep feeling safe , as you are around,

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no one can ever dare to give me a wound,

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i pray to god , for your healthy life,

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ohh shit i forgot your wife.

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i love you both my prettiest couple ,

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no one can replace you both ,

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because you both have all solutions to my trouble.

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Did you enjoy my story? Please let me know what you think by leaving a review! Thanks, Insiya patanwala

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author

WOW.... very nice work...
Keep on writing my dear 😍

6 years
1
author

so moving, a fantastic read. keep up the good writing 😊

6 years
author

Ah! It's very beautiful, just like you, my darling! Keep up the good work!

6 years
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