WHO RAISED US WITH PRIDE
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WHO RAISED US WITH PRIDE

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Summary

fatherhood is linked to better outcomes on nearly every measure of child wellbeing, from cognitive development and educational achievement to self-esteem and pro-social behavior. There is no limit of words to describe the most important person in our life , our FATHER , some call him dad ! A small tribute to our father from thier dearest daughter 💓 Spare time ? Use it for reading my work . And if you like it so please leave a comment or review! Sahre it your dad ❤️✨ Thank you 😊

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
4.7 (3 reviews)
Age Rating
13+

WHO RAISED US WITH PRIDE

So after writing so many times

and clicking on backspace for hundred times,

finally i tried my best , to thank you !

for all of your love and sacrifice you do.

from the day i was born,

u are my unicorn.

those arms who cover me,

those fingers who hold me.

your beautiful lullababies,

to whom i listen even after infancy.

you have not made a day without father,

you know without you everything bother.

those non stop jokes you crack,

we laugh together , even if the humour lack.

apart from laughs , you know my emotions,

you are busy being a clown , when i cry oceans.

whenever my mistakes, converts to your fault,

mom keeps all our plans at halt,

but we enjoy them on time,

and hence we are partner in crime.

you didnt taught me , whats right or wrong,

you made me realize about it.

you wanted me to be independent , not depended lifelong,

you encouraged me to explore,

my skills , my talent and much more.

our bond is really different,

you are more of a bestfried to me , rather than just being a parent.

everyone say i look like you,

a smaller girlier version of you.

this 18 yrs spent with you,

are golden memories of mine with you.

this is what i want to say,

and also i pray everyday .

that i keep feeling safe , as you are around,

no one can ever dare to give me a wound,

i pray to god , for your healthy life,

ohh shit i forgot your wife.

i love you both my prettiest couple ,

no one can replace you both ,

because you both have all solutions to my trouble.

Did you enjoy my story? Please let me know what you think by leaving a review! Thanks, Insiya patanwala

Let Insiya patanwala know what you thought about this chapter!

Deleted User
Deleted User

WOW.... very nice work...
Keep on writing my dear 😍

6 years
1
T. M. Luna
T. M. Luna

so moving, a fantastic read. keep up the good writing 😊

6 years
𝕂𝕣𝕚𝕤𝕙𝕠𝕋𝕙𝕖𝔸𝕝𝕡𝕒𝕔𝕒 ;-;
𝕂𝕣𝕚𝕤𝕙𝕠𝕋𝕙𝕖𝔸𝕝𝕡𝕒𝕔𝕒 ;-;

Ah! It's very beautiful, just like you, my darling! Keep up the good work!

6 years
1

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