What is your opinion?
Good start
"The story is quite appealing and I actually enjoyed the read. However, there were few plotholes and I felt that at some parts the story got rushed. Although, the plot is brilliant and I'm excited about the next updates. You're doing good, just editing some of those parts would make the story easier to understand for the readers. Keep up the good work!! All the best!! 🙌"
❤❤❤❤
"Everything is well written and the details/description are amazing..❤❤❤❤...such an amazing read..❤❤"
AMAZING!
"I love your book! The characters the setting I could literally see it in my mind. You have an interesting imagination! Keep being awesome and continue writing I would actually like to do a co-writing with you. Go check out my books and give me your opinion on mine. I will surely continue to read this book :)"
An adventurous ride!
"I'd like to comment that the premise of your book is very interesting and fresh, which is really good! The writing was also very polished and I can tell a lot of thought went into the plot and characters, which is fantastic! It's incredibly detailed which is also exciting because I can't predict anything at all! The only bit of advice I have for you is that you could brief your 'blurb' which is the beginning text that draws readers like myself in and make it shorter. The amount of plot you laid out in there is just way too much and was too confusing to take in at once. I suggest you could reveal all those juicy bits as we go, through the chapters of the book! Well done, keep up the good work! Much love, Coffee"
Assassin Age: Big Bad Wolf (by DarkPheonix2000)
"I love the plot of the book, but there were a few things that I kept finding that made it a little bit harder to enjoy the book. The book is written in first person POV, but you don't really get to see inside of Kylie's head. You see what she sees, but you don't get the emotion. It makes it feel like a story written in third person because of the lack of thoughts and emotions, but it is written in first person. Another thing is that sometimes there's a teeny tiny error in the punctuation. Some paragraphs that start with someone speaking are missing quotation marks or sometimes something is written with a comma in the wrong spot. The only reason that DarkPheonix2020 got four stars out of five for punctuation is because I don't like any errors in my reading work. As far as errors go, there weren't that many, so I appreciate that. I love the story, but it's definitely missing something that sucks you in. There's all the action, but there's nothing inside Kylie's head. I think with a little more of something else, whether detail or more emotion, the story could be a really good one. I can't wait to see the rest of the story because all in all, Dark Pheonix2000 did a great job."
Assassin Age
"I read the first chapter. The story is good. I like where it's going but some of it just doesn't seem realistic. When the police showed up to arrest those guys wouldn't they call an ambulance especially since some of them are knocked out? Wouldn't they have to bring her in for questioning?Also her not going to gym for a month without a doctor's note? I don't think an actual teacher would allow that. Even with a doctor's note she would still have to be in class, she would probably just have to do book work. Other than that it was actually pretty good. I like that it was her saving him and not the other way around. I didn't see many spelling or Grammer mistakes. I'll definitely continue to read it!"
