What is your opinion?
Interesting start
"The story line is a good start so far. The author describes everything and doesn’t leave you questioning “why??!” Perhaps I may be premature by saying this! 😅 I would have liked to know more about the main characters, something to hook you into one from the beginning. A kind of “yeah I can totally relate to that character”. Great first chapter, I look forward to reading more. Love, 💛 Belle xx"
Beautiful down to every detail!
"The writing is absolutely beautiful, the pacing, the introduction to different characters, the unnerving and heavy atmosphere, everything was done and portrayed perfectly! I'm looking forward to seeing where this story will go! -Coffee Beanz"
Great story in the making!
"Just one chapter yet you've captured the attention of the readers. Can't wait to see what a great story this turns out to be "
