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What is your opinion?
Nice
"The story has the potential and perfect setting. The characters and their dynamics are also well-rounded. However, the countless grammatical and punctuation errors make it very difficult to follow the story smoothly. But, you don't need to worry about that as it can be fixed with final editing. Keep up the good work!"
Good one!
"So....starting from the beginning, the summary is good and interesting. The beginning of the story is also quite good and it is capable of holding the reader's attention. However, I must say that there were quite a number of grammar errors which were slightly disturbing. Other than that, I think it's a good story and has a good potential. Keep it up!"
