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Bright mind

"Defenatley want to read more , I hope theres more to come"

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Bright Mind

"Highly creative, highly original story line...portrays the feelings of the characters as they move into an unknown stage of their lives....the males are adjusting to circumstances and the heroine is just like a blossoming flower...opening, blossoming and expanding while we read....well done author. "

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A unique storyline

"Yeah, I found the story quite interesting. It has a unique storyline, different from all the other cliches from what I've read so far. For English being your second language, I must say that you've done a really good job with this one! I only found some grammar errors here and there and none was big enough to deter the storyline. Reading your words, I don't see a reason why you would even have a need to mention that English is not your primary language. You're doing really good! Keep it up!"

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Interesting

"This is a very interesting story with a unique plot. The overall flow was nice. Good job! "

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Bright mind

"I think it's a good story. The plot is nice. I think the author should have described the character better and there are some grammatical errors.Good work "

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