What is your opinion?
Wow
"This is so well written that I can barely read it—in a good way. You feel every heartbreaking moment, every fear, all of the sadness. It draws you in and you can’t stop reading. The suspense and Edith keep you on the edge of your seat, waiting to see what happens next. Exceptional."
Riviting
"The story started with Edith expressing deep felt emotions about her troubled life with a plan to rid herself of the emotional pain. She's been working on her plan for weeks and was about to carry it out when stranger intercepted her. The beginning sucked me in and the suspense really ramped up as I kept reading. I will be following this talented Author and waiting for the remainder of the riveting thriller, The Emotional Disarray."
Amazing Writing
"Read the first chapter and I was hooked. Beware though, this book is not for the faint of heart. I've never read a book that so perfectly described what it must feel like to commit suicide. It's scary and so sad that the main character felt so empty and unwanted. I wanted to jump into the book and hug her. Well done!"
Emotional Disarray
"I was hooked from the starting of the story. The beginning is written perfectly. The plot is also very interesting. I am really looking forward to the story. GREAT WORK "
Powerful visuals
"This story pulls you into from the very first chapter. I found myself on the edge of my seat. Very well done. "
Mysterious beginning
"Wow! I really loved the overall concept command plot of the story! More importantly, I loved the beginning. It was so well written! I could feel my heartbeat getting louder and goosebumps appearing as I read the chapters. It's only a few chapters published so far but I already hate Edith's parents more than I hate spiders (which I hate a lot). And I already admire Edith. My only suggestion would be to maybe break down your paragraphs as some of them were too long and looked quite bulky. Other than that, I absolutely love your story and can't wait to find out more about Edith's new journey from here!"
