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What is your opinion?
Loved it!
"It was quite the intriguing chapter in all honesty, I am excited to see how you develop the MC’s personality traits etc. it was a tiny bit lengthy but I paid attention for the most of it which was surprising. I’d like to see where you go with this story and how the characters develop. Your physical descriptions were near perfection it kept me on my toes!"
Interesting beginning
"I really love the beginning! It's so captivating and now I just want to read more and more of it! The blurb alone has the ability to pull the readers right into your story and the first chapter published so far is equally enthralling. I'll be waiting for the next update! Good job!👏❣"
