The Lone Alpha Wolf

fionacakes

0 chapitres lus

11 oct. 2020

Very Cool

"Even though some may say this is a cliché werewolf story, I thought it was cool. I liked the plot and I appreciate your writing style. The tone that you write in is very good, it makes the story enjoyable. Just watch for punctuation errors, but other than that I don't see any other problems. Good luck with your story. "

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Tama

4 chapitres lus

29 sept. 2021

The Lone alpha wolf

"Interesting"

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Konstantina88P

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21 oct. 2020

The lone alpha wolf

"The plot of the abandoned wolf-baby could be interesting. However, there's no structure to the story. It reads more like a writer's hasty notes. Also there are too many punctuation mistakes that should be edited out to make the text more easy to read."

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