What is your opinion?
Very readable! :)
"Wonderful piece of writing- I really enjoyed reading this. Was only going to skim, but was sucked in pretty quickly. You captured the characters and their nuances very well.. A few spelling errors, but otherwise easily the best story in this competition. I signed up just to vote for it/ you. :-)"
Very well done.
"The characterization is excellent for everyone involved, even Badger. I love that River gets to reprise her role with him. The plot was entertaining and stayed on track with not only the Christmas theme but a good, solid sub-plot. There were a few minor typos; ex. a 'was' where there should have been a 'what' near the end. At one point you use the word 'kitchen' and then call it 'the galley' shortly thereafter. But none of these little typos and such detract in any way from the story as a whole. Very entertaining. Thank you for a great read."
Popcorn required!
"Wonderful! I found myself wanting to reach for some popcorn while reading this romp! What is special is the story is a very nice break from living on the edge all the time as well as actually making some money. Had the show lived to seven seasons then this is the kind of light episode one would want to see around the holidays. Nice! Well met! I only gave this a 3/5 overall because the writing voice was mimicking the shows hack writing and my preference is to hear the author."
Christmas Cargo
"I thoroughly like the story. I think Jen did a good job capturing the flavor of most the characters. It was a humorous tale, and I admire the thinking behind days with names. There's way too much truth in that."
Nameless day
"Writer has a good ear for dialog in the Firefly 'verse. I enjoyed the story. The caper was quirky and interesting, and the ending was so... so very Mal. There may even have been a few tears. I liked this a lot."
