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Love it

"Can't wait to see how it ends"

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Torn between mates

"Very good story line. I really enjoyed this. I hope to see a part 2 to this."

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Anaaaazing!

"Absolutely amazing, can't wait wait for more! "

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Cora

"Great story, well done author"

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Mates

"Still reading "

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Loving this book!

"I’m loving this book! I can’t wait to see what happens next!"

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Plot twist is excellent

"I just know that the wolf bite will break this curse I'm so excited to read more excellent plot twist I'm loving this book."

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Liking it

"Very nice story"

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Torn between mates

"Couldn't put the book down. Waiting for the next lot of chapters"

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Fine

"Cool Cool Cool Cool "

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It's okay.

"There are a bunch of grammatical and punctuation errors. I figured english is not your first language and that's okay, cause you did a good job with the english. You just have a few things to work on. Other than that the book is interesting."

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Torn between mates

"The plot was a bit too slow for me. The first 6 chapters just kept repeating the same information; that the protagonist has her birthday soon and hopes she's the alpha's mate. It was a bit tedious, to be honest. I'd suggest being done with the birthday in the first 3 chapters at the most, and then go on with the twist. As far as world-building goes, it felt like an info-dump instead of making the reader engage their imagination. It's a mythical world, so there should be some "magic" in reading the story. There weren't many grammar mistakes so it was quite easy to read. Keep up the hard work!"

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