What is your opinion?
Perfectly Creepy
"I loved this story from start to finish. I think it was very well written and quite scary. Every chapter kept you guessing as to what was going to happen next and what was really going on. Over all very well written and scary. I think with a little work you could heightened that fear by being a bit more descriptive. I hope that there is a sequel and more great works from the author. Keep up the good work. READ IT IF YOU HAVEN'T ALREADY. Great short story."
The haunted town
"I love the story…Amazing book😍"
Awesome job
"Awesome job so far. I love books that keep you on the edge and this is definitely one that does. I'm a very hard person to impress when it comes to or books so good job"
The haunted town
"A good story, a good scare. Fast paced, un-put down able. What I didn't like? The hero being the vilian I'll recommend this book to everyone who's into bizarre and uncanny. "
IT WAS AMAZING 😭❤
"I love the plot and the characters so much, The writing was so beautiful. OMG Nathan 😭 i love him.. ❤ It grabbed my attention from the 1st page, and the ending was sad but it was the best part.. ❤ I loved it❤ Yess please, I want to read more about Nathan🥺 If possible bring him back😂"
Loved it
"Just loved it it's was an amazing story plot and the characters were very strong I would love to a movie based on this story"
Haunted town
"Very captivating and interesting Loved it a lot Thank you "
The Haunted Town
"As my first horror story, I truly enjoyed it. I loved the main characters. It blew up my mind and I had to stop and understand the events taking place in the story. Please, write more about some characters. I will be waiting for next horror book by you. You should have described the events of centuries ago a bit more. Please, keep working hard. Great job!! Thank you!!!"
The Haunted Twon
"What a story! I am impressed with the debut work. Simone and Jenna, true warriors and the way they revealed every thing was wonderful. A fantastic thriller and I liked your writing style. Keep on with the good work and do write for u have enough spark and potential 💪 All the best and expecting yet another thriller! Congrats Aymen and Inkitt!!!"
My take on The Haunted Town
"The plot was original. It was really good that it kept me guessing on who's actually who, and it did keep me on my toes most of the time, especially near the end. In my opinion, the story could be better. I feel like if you could work on the descriptions and the emotions of the characters, plus the grammar and the technical side of writing, specifically, the spacings in each line/paragraph, this could actually be more intense and horrific. To be honest, I felt like the plot lacked more gruesome details. I don't know about you, but I'd like a horror story with more on the scary side--the kind that could give me nightmares. But that's just me. This is still a good start for a first novel, so kudos to you for being able to finish it! :D Thank you for sharing! Keep writing and getting better! You have a bright future ahead of you. :D"
The haunted town.
"Should definitely be a follow up to the story."
I Loved it!!
"The haunted town. For my first horror book, I do have to say it was pretty impressive. The start was gripping and gave me goosebumps immediately. The story had an air of mystery throughout which I loved. The flow was overall very good and things were well co-ordinated. There were few spelling errors here and there but that didn't make the story less interesting. The descriptions were also very well done and I really enjoyed it. I have to say, I really liked Nathan's character and how he became 'good' at the end of the story. I disliked Brianna, the bad guy, who doesn't hate the bad guy. However, there are some questions which were left off; *How did the old man outside the town know of the shadows? *If Simone went missing, after destroying the dagger, shouldn't have their parents realised she had been missing if everyone else in the town got their memory back? *A certain Aurora was mentioned but what role did she play in the curse? *At the end, where Simone was watching Nathan's video, there was also the little girl, who had the same name as this 'Aurora' are they somewhat related? *If Brianna and the mayor were the same person, how did Simone's dad not realize that? Overall the book was enjoyable!"
