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Beautiful work

"This short story achieves so much with so little. The emotional style is not overdone, the grammar and spelling are top notch, and the resolution comes as something of a surprise. This writer has talent, and should be included in any bibliophile's reading list. Thanks for posting this, I genuinely enjoyed it."

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Emotional!!!!!

"I am very speechless. I want to cry. This story is just.....emotional! It's a good short story (one-shot whatever you want to call it), very well written, got my attention since the very beginning -the title caught my attention- , and as a reader I want this story to be in my endless collection of books to read (repeatedly). Oh, and nice twist at the end! that part shook me to the core."

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