What is your opinion?
Destiny Responds
"I really like how you've portrayed your words . The descriptions are beautifully written and the theme is also intriguing. Keep up the good work!"
Interesting
"A very god start very emotional. Try to show rather than tell that will shorten paragraphs. Also careful with the religious content. Its okay to put it in as it is fundamental to the plot and story but this is fiction. Read as escapism so always bare that in mind. You don't want to offend your readers. For numbers write the word. Other than that great job look forward to the rest."
Speechless
"This story is so beautifully written, and the words flow nicely, The plot already seems so interesting and the detail makes it all stand out! I can't wait to continue reading this story!"
Destiny Responds
"Although I'm only through the first chapter, I've felt a great deal of emotion within the writer's words. I believe that Raven Snow lives within the character of this young girl and I believe that this story will continue to become a heart-touching story as it proceeds. I also admire the writing skills of this author for a wide variety of words have been used to bring out the best of the character's feelings. All the best to the writer and congratulating him/her on continuing this story!"
