Let's go!

"That was an engaging story. Finished it all in one day it was so good!"

Review

"The book is really nice. the chapters really engaging "

Too Good

"I admire your creativity. You have written a great piece. I want to promote your Inkitt book for free to my list of newsletter subscribers. If that is alright by you then please email me at exzordersplrwso AT gmail.com to book your spot, thanks."

Please get published

"This is really good. I'm at chapter 23 and throughly hooked. I just went onto Amazon to see if you had a kindle book out as I'm sick of reading on my computer. I really like the development of the world , and want to know what will happen to Sacet, Eno and Tau next. Did you know that Tau means "lion" in Sepedi, one of the 11 official languages of South Africa?"

Acolytes: A Cast for Control

"Great story arc. Nice command of the balance of overview and detail. Feels a bit like a multi-player computer game, but provides satisfying explanations for all the apparent magic. Please keep writing!"

Very impressed

"An interesting take on the fictional idea of portals, how they can be strategically used and developed over time. Also, great use of visual language and the writing style captured Sacet's stream of conscious accurately. Quite an immersive world you've got here :) and I like how it's structured, with the nomads and dominions and the interesting technologies they use. Very well done."

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Fantastic Read!

"From the moment I started reading I loved it! I love the fact that you added some detailing pictures as it helped visualize some aspects and allowed you to give less attention to some of the details and at the same time it helps remember some details too such as rank and station/faction. Just once again an overall fantastic read! Already following you on wattpad as I have to find out who those masterminds are behind the 'fake' war! Thanks for sharing your writing with everyone!"

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Acolytes: A Caste for Control

"Absolutely loved it. Was drawn into their world right from the start. Portals, powers, lasers and nasty alien things in a world where war has always been. The development of Sacet's powers and fierce love and protection she felt for her brother Eno even had me thinking about the book when life was interfering and getting in the way of my reading lol. I'm actually going to check out Wattpad and see if I can find James' sequels as I need to know what happens next."

Acolytes: A Caste for Control

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Great Read!

"This book was exciting from the first page to the last! I loved the characters and their development throughout the story. I loved Sacet and how she used the portals which grew in strength as she developed her skill level. Recommend it highly."

A great read!

"I've read this story on Wattpad already, as well as the sequels, and I have to say, it's a great story! The plot and the easy-to-read style are fantastic."

Practically ready for publishing

"As the title suggests, I loved it. The story, the charachers, the world. Completeley amazing. Now, I could go on and on about what was good with this story but that doesn´t seem very helpful,so instead I´m just gonna point out the one thing I thought could be improved. The back-story of the characters are great, so I wish you would do the same thing for the world. You get most of it explained to you after a little while, but there are still some parts that seem to fuzzy, like are the FD and MD separate countries or just areas? Are there even countries? Where are they located geographically? Same with the desert, where is that? It isnt even a big problem, but it gets just a little confusing when you´re reading certain parts. Anyways, I love the idea of the powers and how they work, an uncommonly well developed fictional-power-science-idea. Looking forward to a sequel, Im assuming there is going to be one. Anyways, I hope you get this published. It sure deserves it."

Great story

"Great story. The dialogue is sometimes a bit weird. But since I am not english that can be my own lack of understanding"

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Good start

"Good plot, great opening, story moves along well, a little wordy in spots. Keep up the writing and the characters will fill the story in on there own "