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Great!

"It's a great story and a good concept. I haven't seen much Hetalia fanfiction so I was immediately delighted with that Also, I like the idea you're going with the crossover. I also love the way you use those cliffhangers :P Keep up the good work!"

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Interesting

"When I first saw the story I didn't expect it to be a crossover but was pleasantly surprised. I like how the plot was unfolding and the characters are well written. Good job. There are just a few grammatical errors now and then. But other than that I can't see much fault in the story. I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work! :D"

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Omg I love this!

"I love how this story is based off hetalia XD I say its one of the funniest anime out there XD Anyway, it's pretty good so far and the characters are well developed, grammar is a strong point as well as your writing style Keep it going!!"

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