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Gripping

"From the very begging I was gripped. You have beautifully described the scene and have a painted a very vivid picture for the reader. The plot is unique and compelling and I cannot wait to continue reading! "

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Loved it!

"Brilliantly written. The beginning is promising and I am hooked. This story has everything to offer from adventure, romance, magic, to suspense. The writer's vivid imagination and meritorious narrating skills makes this book unputdownable. Keep up the good work! "

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Interesting

"The story starts with an interesting twist: your female protagonist running away with not who you expected her to. That kept me hooked. There are a lot of mistakes regarding punctuation and grammar. I know that we all try to edit as much as we can, but there are online editors that can help a lot. You should consider checking those out. Keep up the good work."

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