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Baby, Let Me In

"Baby, Let Me In is a modern romance story, mixed with humour, serious themes, and some steamy chapters 😉 I love the author's vivid writing style, and her lovely descriptions of characters. always with a spark of humour to it. Phrases like, "Smelling funky" made my day and I am looking forward to reading more of these expressions. So far, only three chapters are online, and I am curious how the love story will develop; If there are any troubles ahead, and how the characters will solve them. I would also like to point out that I am normally not the biggest fan of explicit sex scenes - not because I cannot handle them - it's because most of them are badly written. In this case however, the author has surprised me, by using metaphors and symbolism to establish the sex scene. Good job. You also feel for the female protagonist and for the other couple as they represent real-people-issues. Keep up the good work! Best, M."

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Amazing Chemistry

"There is some amazing chemistry going on with the characters. Their descriptions are written excellent, and the dialogue is easy to follow. I can tell it is going to be an intense and hot story to read. I can't wait to read more."

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Loved it

"This was well written and very captivating. I loved the relatable characters and how well this flowed. It’s just beginning but i feel like this read is going to deliver impressively. I’m looking forward to reading more of this. Kudos to the Author because I’m going over to read another one of her works lol."

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Let the Right One In!

"Sage Nwafor knows she deserves better then ugly relationships in life. Tired of being mistreated by men, she decides to never fall in love again with anyone including Dylan Andino. Sure he’s drop dead gorgeous with his stunning blue eyes and well-toned body. But she’s been with attractive men before and knows how deceitful good looks can be. Does she dare trust him with her heart? Women have always came easily to Dylan. But there’s something different about Sage. Somethings that pulls him in and stops him from playing his usual hurtful games. Perhaps for the first time ever, Dylan realizes he wants something more from Sage then just her body. Can he convince her to trust a man just one more time? A nice romance story, starring normal human beings instead of fantastical, magical creatures for once. I kind of liked that. There was only two chapters at the time of this review but it’ll be interesting to see how their romance proceeds. I’m predicting something is going to happen that will cause Sage to distrust Dylan. (Like she’ll see him with another woman though it would be under totally innocent circumstances) then he’ll have to work his butt off trying to win her over again. Lol. We’ll see. An excellent start to a promising romance novel. "

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10 out of 10

"Sage is a refreshing and relatable character, and most of all she is black which is something so crucial for other African Americans to see when they go to read a book. Representation is so important so good work!"

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Baby, let me in

"This is so well written! The writing style is amazing. I love how the characters are so relatable. Especially the fact that Dylan is a male nurse! Never read that before and I’m excited to learn more. 🤩"

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Great Start

"This story has a great start. I am really excited about reading it. However, its only a chapter I can tell it going to be a good story. Eagerly waiting for the next update. "

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Baby, Let me in

"I really like the fact that all your characters are so unique. The descriptions are amazing as well. However, you might want to shorten the paragraphs a little because this much information at once is kind of hard to take in. Overall, the story seems interesting and I cannot wait to read more of it!"

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