What is your opinion?
My Review
"It's only one chapter, but a great start to an amazing story. Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing the development of this project."
5/5 ✨
"The only correction I have for you is not to use 'Lol' in dialogue. Other than that, keep posting updates because I'll definitely be keeping up with this story."
Good Story
"First of all, the cover of this book is absolutely mouthwatering. Second of all, I enjoy reading the first chapter of this book and I look forward to reading the second one and more. So far, I have seen how the story is well maintained and plotted out. I can see that it will be able to grip readers. However, the 'Lol' in the dialogues between the characters a little bit disturbing to me personally. I think it could have been narrated as 'she laughed out loud' and then followed by the dialogue. Just a suggestion, thou. Overall, I highly recommend this book! Well done, Author."
