introduction
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Mia Adair
she was a pretty girl. Whose not too shy and not too noisy. She lives a carefree life trying to enjoy her life to the fullest despite the worries and sorrows that runes through her head. She gives absolutely no fuck about what people think. And that’s what makes her bold and confident but there this one person that can make her knees weak and her mind loose all her confidence.....
Gwen Carson
Well, his known for his Greek goodness scripture body, and face. And girls are ready to fall over their knees to please him. But he only wished for one girl over her knees begging for his mini demon. Well, they all dint know who the real Gwen is and the darkness that lurked in his life
This is a great start. But with so many grammar problems... its hard to get in the mood to enjoy this great story. If you were to do editing and grammar checks. More people will read past the first 2 pages.. ok? You haves great start of a book. I really want you to succeed ok... much love from LB Harpdog
Okay amma be honest this book sounds hot asf but the grammar issue is the only thing holding it back .😎🤯
It sounds like its gonna be hottttt. I dont need to state the obvious, you got it.