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Erotic yet romantic

"Well written with just the right amount of spiciness and romance blended together. Definitely keeps readers wanting to read more to see what all happens. Very detailed."

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Facinating...

"I will give you credit... its hard writing in English... but you did pretty good. Try using word doc on computer to fix alot of your grammar mistakes..lol but you did get me a little hard while reading this story... good job so far."

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Interesting

"Aside from grammatical issues, it was a good start. I use grammarly to help minimize grammatical errors, so you may want to look into it. Other than that, good gob! I can't wait to read more!"

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Unexpected

"It just has a few grammatical errors but I am happy with it overall "

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Unexpected is an interesting story

"The punctuations and grammar are very poor which makes reading hard so please read through ur story "

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Good

"It was a god read. Really liked it."

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HOT 🥵

"Okay, if you're looking for hot , steamy badass s🥴x the come right here .Her opening scene was amazing .She only wrote two chapters so far and I'm already loving it. If you can see past the grammar issues , it's wonderful 😉🥵😎🥴"

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