Without You

Liv

7 chapters read

Dec 18, 2020

Without You

"Holy shit! Like HOLY SHIT!!! I fucking love this story. Even if the ending made me tear up just a teensy weensy little bit. The writing style reminded me a bit of the Great Gatsby but easier to follow. Everything was obviously treated with care and the emotions flow from the story with ease. Hands down one of my favorite stories on Inkitt. It's just a beautiful story. There were some grammatical/punctuation errors, namely missing commas. A tip, if dialogue is followed by a dialogue tag like 'he said or she said' then it ends with a comma, then the closed quotation marks and the dialogue tag with the first letter being a lowercase one unless it's a proper noun. Also, at the very end when it switched to third, maybe put it in italics because it got a little confusing. And, with the dates, perhaps bold it or something to help it stand out because it got meddled with the text and was a bit confusing at first. This story was amazing and i hope my review helped any. Cant wait to read more books by you in the future. Keep writing!"

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tonymma24

0 chapters read

Dec 9, 2020

This book is very good and it is very immersive and I think everyone who reads it would love it

"I chose a rating of 9 out of 10 just because of the immersive experience of material that is being written from the first sentence you are immersed and the book puts you in like this peaceful state to read through. I would recommend this book to all of my friends. Keep up the good work. "

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shezz

0 chapters read

Dec 12, 2020

Without you

"It's a amazing story. I like that the story is very detailed and characters are well written. Great work 🤩"

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TS Rose

2 chapters read

Dec 11, 2020

Without you.

"A powerful tale, well written, with characters that are interesting and intense. It has a most dramatic twist, which is just what all short stories should have. For those who love a romantic tale, this one is well worth reading. We've pointed out a couple of grammatical and punctuation issues to the writer, but on the whole those can be forgiven, because the word choice is beautiful, and the story is very moving."

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