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Very captivating story. I couldn’t drop the book

"Hooked on the story. Great imagination! Well done. Writing style could improve if writer read more books of the same genre. "

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Amazing Story!

"A Magical story with a forbidden love! And so, so much more. I love this story and the ending couldn't be better or more surprising. Definitely one of my Inkitt favorites!"

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Unbreakable premonition

"I couldn't stop reading this awesome book 👌beautiful written amazing world building ❤. Definitely recommend it 👍to any fantasy lover. Great read 📚"

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Amazing

"Amazing. Although i wish Ariya and Fabien could spend more time together happy, so we could see them and their friends develop a bit before the massacre, this is still an exellent book. One small thing is to perhaps introduce the ‘evil twin’ idea earlier in the book so it seems more present in the whole plot. For example in Harry Potter the idea of Voldemort came up very early, so it established that as the main threat. Other than that, an amazing book that i wish had more content/is longer so i can read more of it! Good job with this."

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Magical

"I cannot believe that you do not have more likes for this book. I love it!!! Every chapter has me ready for the next. So ready to find out how this relationship ends. Keep writing!!"

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shape shifter

"I love reading books"

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My Review

"Pleasantly enjoyable. Kudos to the writer I loved the humor placed perfectly throughout the story. The characters are lovable and I would recommend this book."

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So Funny!

"Oh god, this has had me rolling. These two make me laugh so hard. Their relationship is a crazy rollercoaster ride. I really like the way magic works in this and their ability to speak mentally with each other. I am reading it non stop and can't wait for the next chapters to come out."

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