What is your opinion?
Great plot
"It has a great plot, but the grammar is a bit of a problem. Try to read and read to fix it, though grammar can't be learned in one-night, experience can. Please keep updating because some of the chapters are becoming interesting. All in all, it's a nice book."
needs work
"Sounds to me like English isn't you're first language. So writing is a great way to expand that. I'd also recommending you read. read tons! read all genres of books. it will help you understand better sentence structure, word placement, grammar. story is interesting but needs a better hook. good luck, let me know if I can help."
3/5 ⭐️
"The plot sounds interesting enough, but I wasn't really getting into it. The summary lacked depth, as did the rest of your story. Your grammar isn't the best, and it really brought down the quality of the book. The characters' thoughts and actions don't seem human at all. Luckily, you only have a few chapters posted, so you can easily edit them, and then continue writing. Good luck to you **"
