What is your opinion?
Rose
"Interesting start have to say, It's intriguing and has this mysterious feeling to it. It got me a bit confused though at the beginning, well the summary. I read it twice but I felt a bit lost. Overall of the story. Good, like the flow and story structure. Didn't see mistakes, maybe I was engrossed but I like that the author was descriptive. Well done, keep it up!"
Intresting Start
"I've read the first two chapters that have been published, and it's intriguing. The world is very developed, and all the characters are full of personality. It will be interesting to see what you do with the rest of the story. There are a lot of characters thrown at you at once though and there aren't many explanations and a lot of viewpoint changes which can be confusing. I would suggest, making your chapters shorter, new chapter for a new viewpoint maybe? My only other note is that your summary at the beginning is very interesting, but it has nothing to do with the first few chapters. Keep up the good work! Sofia"
Interesting
"I liked the different point of views, however at every chapter the commertary explaining that the next POV would solely be from one characters point of view kind of threw me off a bit. Good writing is showing not telling. (Just keep that in mind - I know its an ongoing story) Otherwise I like the story, its interesting and keeps your attention. I would really like to see the writer continue with the multiple POV's since it isnt something that is used a lot in the writing industy (to my knowledge of course) Anyway, keep up the great work girl! You have a winner here."
