What is your opinion?
Captivating!
"I loved the beginning of the Heirs of Theia. The writer makes it clear that English is not her first language, but the imagery used in her writing captivates you to continue reading the story. As a fantasy lover, my favourite part is the beginning when the fairy lost her heart to the human boy and helped him become a King, only to have him betray her. That was heartbreaking to see, but the writing did have a fairy tale like quality to it. Keep going, you are doing so well!"
Enchanting!
"I love fairy tales and mythological creatures like fairies and dragons, so this story if very good from that point of view. The author makes it clear that English isn't her first language, but their English is so good it isn't noticeable. It would be interesting to see what you do with the rest of your work. Keep up the amazing work! Sofia"
