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What is your opinion?
Before he cheats.
"I like the plot and storyline so far. There is also good character development, not too long nor too short. Can't wait for more chapters!!"
Good book.
"Really good book, but has a lot of grammatical errors. That, and the sentences being run-on and the whole chapter being in one paragraph caused me to give you 4 stars. The story is great otherwise!"
Good start!
"You have definitely started a good story here and hope to read more in the future. Just a side note, try and keep the sentences short. Some sentences and dialogues are long without any punctuation marks. Try adding some of them in in order to pause and take a breath of air. Other than that, this was great! Thank you."
