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BEAUTIFUL

"AS ALWAYS you write SO WELLLL!!! You said to not hate on the plot so I WILL NOT DO THAT, the plot is interestng because its all TRUE and I WILL not even complain about the LACK OF WOLVES!!!!!!!!!! YOu should write a fiction story based on THIS AND WITH SOME WOLVES or other FANSTASY THINGS the drama would bake it AMAAZINGG the only thing mabye to FIX is the GRAMMER and PUCTUATION and maybe make it more DIRECT??? That is it for now i have RUN OUT OF your STORIES to reviewwwww ~~>_<~~ i HOPE you write more soon and then I WILL REVIEW THEM!!!!!!!"

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REVIEW!!!

"Great story, you are really brave to be willing to write about this. You are a great author!!!"

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Attention-grabbing

"I'm not exactly sure how to review this because it's a true story, but it was certainly interesting. I like how you're willing to share your personal experiences through a short story. The writing style is kind of informal, which I'm not sure if that was intended or not but it read like a blog post. Still, it was cool to just read some casual life experiences, and I think that a plot for a fiction story based around this could be cool."

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Raised Eyebrow

"The writing is challenging. Technically the story is hard to get into. But. There are so many retreads out there, so many clones, so many writers trying to do a version of *Twilight* or *Hunger Games* - and this isn't that. It's not *Gone Girl* or *Mean Girls* or...I don't know what it is, but I do know that the writer is willing to open her heart and dump the contents onto the page. It's raw, it's real, it's not yet well-written but the writing chops will come in time, and if when they do the writer still has the courage to be this honest, this vulnerable, she will be miles ahead of her competition. I can't put my finger on it exactly (which bugs me no end) but there's...*something* very significant here. Please keep writing"

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