Prologue
There was dead silence outside the small cottage. Not a single man moved from his position all anxiously waiting for the signal from their commander. One of the men raised his hand signalling the others to follow. Within a second the door was flung open and a small troop of five men entered through the cottage door only to find the room empty. “Search the cottage”, commanded the man who initiated the operation.
A light muffled noise could be heard. On further investigation, a young boy was found. the condition of the boy seemed worse so he was immediately sent into an ambulance.
“Sir, we couldn’t find any of the kidnappers. It looks like they left several hours ago.” informed one of the uniformed men.
“what about the young woman, any signs of her?” questioned the commander.
“Sir, no signs of her being held captive” responded the man.
“Maybe they took her along with them leaving no traces behind,” said one of the Detectives.
“I want you to take a troop with you and search the area” ordered the commander addressing the uniformed officer.
“Detective, I want the forensic team over and examine the cottage. Leave no stone unturned.“ordered the commander.
“Already done Sir, the team will arrive shortly. I have also asked Detective Brown to examine the surveillance cameras around the block” responded the Detective.
The commander seemed to be in a lot of stress as he kept tapping his toe.
“We have to find the woman as quickly as we can, there is a lot of pressure from the commissioner.” the commander stated.
“Who exactly is she?” the detective questions inquisitively.
"Elonzo Hernandez's fiance" replied the commander.
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Indicated, all the names, characters, businesses, places, events, and incidents in this book are the product of the author’s imagination. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.
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Off to an extremely intense and intriguing start - so many mysteries are just waiting to be unsolved! I really enjoyed the unconventional opening, it's really captivating and extreme, even though a bit short.
One advice I can give you as a writer is to not add a lot of detail to the content...It should leave the readers in the middle of the road so they would want to know what happens next!
Other than that good story!🙌🏽💯❤️ and a great start