What is your opinion?
Great !!!!
"Hey... Okay so great start!! I really like the construction and theme of the story. Very innovative and creative story. 🌟🌟 However there are few grammatical errors which can easily be fixed :) ( I face the same issue to I can understand 😅😅) but it didn’t stop me from enjoying it. I’m really looking forward to read the rest. ❤️ Good job 💯💯"
Loving it
"The writing technique and plot kept me coming back for more. I enjoyed the details and descriptions. This story reminded me of many other stories I love which definitely added to the wow factor of the story. The writing technique is just perfect for the story and expressed everything very well. Great read :)"
Just woah
"Very innovative and creative story line. Amazing work by the writer. Interesting plot. It is wonderful, waiting for more updates."
Interesting
"I am really into your writing technique as it is what I love about novels and yours is really good"
An amazing start
"Now this is really interesting and i just love it....cant wait to read the rest.....❤❤❤❤"
Great start
"I’m really in love your character Kathy, the author has taken time to write throughout. I can’t wait for this book to unfold. I’m looking forward to more updates! "
Alazne
"Oh my! Now this really is interesting! I'm already loving it and can't wait for you to update! Please do, the suspense really is thrilling! Very nice!"
A Good Start!
"I think it's a really good start. The action packed prologue really snaps the reader in, a sharp contrast to when the first chapter starts, introducing the MC and her friends until the cliffhanger ending. I could see this being a leave no stones unturned mystery, and a good one. It could benefit from a quick proofread to fix quite a few grammatical errors and maybe add a few more details but I think its a very strong start. You're a good author. Keep writing!"
Makes me think of one of my favourite novels.
"*THE GIRL ON THE TRAIN* - that's the novel it makes me think of. (so far) It really has some amazing potential to be a extremely good mystery story, and I love mystery stories. As for the plot, it is refreshing to see a spin on the usual that revolves around mystery, but also I would say the writer could use a little more suggestion in the work. My writing professor once told me to craft a great mystery is to confirm nothing. and I mean nothing. Leaving the confirmation to the reader is the best if you want to mess them up with the actual confirmation of everything. I love the writing style, and the story as whole. Just make sure on your punctuation :) Keep it up :) You have the potential to be the next Paula Hawkins! xxx TVW"
Alazne
"Wow, a great story, which has great potential. Hope you keep writing more book "
Amazing opening!
"There's only the first few chapters up so far, but wow! Just Wow! I like how you chuck the readers in at the deep end with the action-packed prologue. But then the first chapter is such a contrast, meeting the main character and her friends. They've got really good relationships so it will be interesting to see what you do with that in later chapters. And then ending the first chapter, with the heroine being told that this man has been looking for her for three years! Just amazing. Keep up the stellar work! Sofia"
Interesting
"This story has the beginning of a great story. I look forward to reading the rest of it."
Impressive
"Overall till now really good hope to read more"
Interesting
"This book has the quality of an interesting and well-written thriller. The story is compelling since the first sentence. Even though it has some grammar errors, but that didn't stop me from continuing to read the story. Grammar errors can be easily fixed. What matters is the plot and the style that is great. :)"
Alazne
"I like the plot so far. It’s well written and I look forward to upcoming chapters.keep it coming girl x "
Really good
"I’m impressed with this plot... it’s so great and intriguing I feel like I could never stop!! I noticed a few things about grammar and stuff but it’s such a small error I doubt it even matters:) I wish u good luck for your future works x"
Great work
"As I told you earlier do make the content short and sweet😊...You have a good writing style and overall its an amazing book! Waiting for more!;)"
A Good Start!
"Looking forward to see where this is going! I love the mystery that's already set up! A fresh, new story project that I can look forward to catching up on as it updates. There's a little bit of editing needed, but overall it was easy to let the story play out as images in my head and just follow along. Can't wait to see more!"
Alazne
"There's really not enough in in the first to chapter's to honestly rate the contents within... Oh, the stories there.. but (How do I say this).. It felt... well like 'box writing'. The outline fought the storyline.. Okay, it was 'gangbuster's out of the gate.. strong... Then, as I read... it was like it was not quite sticking together, like you were reading the words of the story, but not the ambiance within the story. The description of the characters was brunt, almost 'injected' within the conversations.. I got no sense of being there... The storyline has a strong idea to it... more 'meat around the potato's'... more details around the story where your standing (In a read you should almost feel like your 'there', living it though the story, 'escapism'... you want to be there) This felt like it was a figment in the distance I could never get close enough to catch what I was reading. Again... YES a good story, Author has the right path... looks to be a lengthy novel... BUt needs to show the readers their actually THERE... I read the words, but there's... no cling to take me into it. I WISH TO APOLOGIZE TO THE AUTHOR IF THIS SEEMS TO BE A "RUDE" REVIEW / IT"S NOT!... IT A WAKE-UP,-SHAKE-UP CALL... YES, GOOD STORY! CHARACTERS GREAT! INTERACTION FANTASTIC! but, it don't take me into the story.... i'm just reading the words... nothing forms in my head.."
