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Marvelous!

"This story had a little bit of a rough start but it finished with a great ending!"

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BROKEN BONDS

"I loved reading this story. ❤️ What was the time period, though?"

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Broken Bonds

"This book was wonderful. I will definitely read it again "

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Great

"Love the characters. Can't wait to find out what happens."

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Cute

"Very good book. "

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Love it!

"I have only one opinion on this story: simply beautiful!"

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Broken Bonds

"I enjoyed your story very much. If you were to change anything, perhaps a chapter or two from Rae's parents point of view. I understand what they did but not why they did it. Lae needs an opportunity to be something besides a total hothead. You never told us what S. stood for. What's his story. It was kinda glossed over. Perhaps more about Rae and Talon getting together at the end. Maybe you could write a sequel where Brynn finds her mate. I was sorry when Elaine died but it made a plot twist that explained most of what was going on. Your plot kept me rivited.I look forward to reading more of your work🌹"

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Broken Bonds

"I like this book alot and I have enjoyed every single part of the way but only the happy moments of Talon and Rey are few just in one paragraph, do you have Book two coming can't wait. Talented writer"

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interesting short story

"interesting story "

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What an amazing book

"This book was overall amazing, you never hear of the mate being as caring and selfless as Rey was. However there was some missing pieces in the story that kind of made the chapters unlcear/unfinished. Can’t wait to read more of your books :)"

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Kay

"An interesting read "

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Love it

"Loved the book"

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Broken Bonds

"I enjoyed this story good flow and good plot it just shows you can forgive but never forget learn from it"

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Bonds Broken

"Thank you for a story that kept me glued to my phone . A story that swept me away from reality but also give hope. I dont care for grammar i care for a good story. "

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Broken Bonds

"A pretty good read. There were definitely spelling and grammatical errors where even the wrong word was used. Some of the sentence structure could use some work. The tense that was being used also changed within the story."

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BROKEN BONDS

"HEARTBREAKING, BUT BEAUTIFUL READING! AT THE BEGINNING I WASN'T SURE IF I WOULD FINISH READING BUT I KEPT ON AND IT JUST KEPT GETTING BETTER! I WILL CONSIDER THIS ONE OF MY FAVORITE READINGS! I GOT PAST THE ERRORS WITH NO PROBLEMS! KEEP UP THE GOOD WRITING! LOVED IT!"

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Lovely storyline

"Can't wait to read the other novels. Thanks for sharing."

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Broken bonds

"I think this is a fantastic story so far what's a great plot I can't wait to see what happens with Ray and Talon at the end"

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Alpha

"Really like the airy lime. It too confusing"

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Broken Bonds

"WOW!! Finished this in less than a day.. OMG Loved it, love your writing, style and thoughts... :) looking forward to reading more of your work :)"

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