What is your opinion?
A lovely start
"(Ongoing, read til the end of chapter 3) This was a really good start. The author did a good job of catching us up on the goings-on between the two MC (this is a sequel) without making it feel it feel like an info dump. The third person narration really helped with this; it gave the piece of a flow-y feel that allowed the author to cover a long stretch of timeframe without it feeling jump-y, so props to the author with that. The characters are well developed and come across strongly. The perspective of both MC's is given, which is very helpful in gaining an insight into both their mindsets. Their love for one another came across very well this way, especially with the little extra details like the note he left for her in one chapter. Really good job with this :)"
Review
"First off I didn't read the first so I'm a bit lost were this is going, but the story looks promising. The flow and structure are nice and the details are good. Its a nice story with potential. I recommend anyone interested in a nice romance story. Verywell done and keep it up!"
Good!
"I'm not sure what the plot of this book is going to be yet, since it's only chapter five as of this review, and I can't really tell where it's going. I think the characters are likable and I'm glad you didn't put in an almost recap of the last book in the second one through dialogue or narration (I see that a lot in sequels and always thinks it's strange since the characters don't know it's the sequel lol), so I appreciate that. I think there are some problems with slipping to past tense when you should be writing in the present tense, but that happens to everybody. There are a couple word choice and grammar mistakes that Grammarly would help you a lot with, so I'd recommend getting the basic version (it's free) or you can buy the premium version (I have that and it helps a lot with editing) All in all, good job!"
