What is your opinion?
Great read
"I gave it five stars before even finishing it because it's a great book. What I loved the most was the diversity of the characters and how crooked they all are. Please tell me when you update. I can't wait for another chapter."
A great book
"I enjoyed reading, was just a bit confused in most part in what was being said. But like I always say we are not professionals and we all have room for improvement even if we were. But so far great book, and keep it up, your writing can only get better."
Nice
"Hello, I like how things take a turn. It's a pretty good book, but I don't know much, but I think its good but who doesn't want their work to get better. I like that you changed the font on the word “hated” made me feel what you said. I like the plot. Not only that, but I would read more probably. Furthermore, I just don't know. Overall it's good just needs work."
The head of the table
"Hey. I really like how you started the book. The summary was really clear of what to expect. The details of the gambling match that you’d added was really precise, I could actually feel the tension and excitement 🌟 However, I couldn’t quiet understand the part where - the girl lost her factory to him, how can he stop her from continuing the school ? And why was the principal telling them about it? Isn’t he the one who should be taking decision ?? So that part was kinda blur and unrealistic for me. Second, background of the other character’s such as the brother’s. Maybe adding a few background details about them would be good. (Personal opinion :) and the relationship status that they have with their friends. As I was confused about the part where the two guys were in a room together and one of them got coffee for another. So are they in a relationship or was is just a friendship thing? I’m sorry I can’t remember the names 😅). So adding details would really help :)!!! But overall I liked it ❤️❤️ "
