What is your opinion?
THE UNDERWORLD
"I love this story. I am obsessed with the plot of the story. I want part 2 of this story. The Underworld is a fascinating story of slavery and organized crime. Grammar and sentence structure could use some work but I can appreciate the flow. Good buildup, decent character development. Can't wait to see what happens next!""
Melting
"Its the first time I read this kind of book (I dont know the name), and It definitively made me want to read more."
The Underworld
"I can't wait to read more. This book is great with all the her pent up anger, all her pent up terror. "
The Underworld
"No wonder she felt that way in the laundry room"
Good progression
"I love how the book is starting out. This is the first book I’ve read of the Mafia stories that actually goes into detail about how the girls were taken and the experiences they go through. It really helps shed more insight in the story and I’m looking forward to seeing how this story will play out."
The underground
"I like how you started it, can’t wait til the plot starts. I see potential in this, can’t wait to see more."
😍excellent
"This is my first time reading this genre and it won’t be my last I love it 😍"
Interesting….
"I’ve been trying to figure out how the writer had Alaina go from being brutally beaten and raped to actually wanting to be with Markus(?) Have you ever actually spoken to rape victims? Or anyone who’s been sexually assaulted?? I kind of feel like more research should have been done. The story has been good, very detailed, even suspenseful, but I don’t like the flow of the sexual content in all honesty. "
Solid work
"The Underworld is a fascinating story of slavery and organized crime. Grammar and sentence structure could use some work but I can appreciate the flow. Good buildup, decent character development. Can't wait to see what happens next!"
Alania is going through a lot
"I like the storyline and think that it has a lot of good unexpected plot twists. The sister seems really nice, despite her horrible family."
Nice !
"Hey, it’s good so far. I really like the construction and theme of the story. You have a clear idea where you want to take the story. The relationship of Alaina and Dean is so good. I really appreciate you taking the idea of a plus size girl as a main character over a zero figure girl. ❤️🤟🏻 However, there are few things that I would like I like to suggest - 1) Introduce an interest twist in the beginning of the chapter which will make the readers wants to read. 2) add more humour. 3) There are few grammatical errors which can easily be fixed. ( we all face the same issue ✌🏻) It’s just a personal opinion, if you don’t wish to make it, it’s all good. ❤️ I wish you all the best ☘️✨"
