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A perfect happy ending!

"From the beginning to the end, everything in this book was utterly beautiful. The blend of emotions and the scenes, characters, names and actions were purely genuine and amazing. I loved how strong Elizabeth was till the end. Even though, I was a little sad when she rejected Hayden for the second time but I knew from the beginning that Mark was hers... It was a very happy ending and how you explained soccer in every detail was much appreciated. I really enjoyed reading how enthusiastic the end was. I wish you all the good luck for your next books. I can't wait to read more books of yours. Keep writing, Keep inspiring :) Nashra_Pervez ✓ "

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I love it

"I like the way of this story leading to till the end.Thank you writer!👍👍"

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Woman's Resilve to Stay Single

"At first it appeared confusing, but that was probably just me not being able to read consistently. Sorry about that. After EliElizabeth's explanation of her life a lot was cleared up for me. I did not care for the soccer game background at first but again the writer was able to instill interest in me through the excitement of the characters. Good ending. All in all I really enjoyed this book. Looking forward to the next. Btw you need to get a good proofreader. The spelling and grammatical errors detracted from the meaning every now ans then!"

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Love this

"Amazingly written. How I love happy ending. "

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So good and interesting plot❤️waiting to read more

"So good and interesting plot❤️waiting to read more"

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Woman's resolve to stay single

"I liked the lead character Elizabeth, she seems like someone we can relate to. I would love to recommend this book to my friends."

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Loving it so far

"This review covers the first five chapters of the story. I can't wait for more chapters to be posted, especially since the last one left off on a cliffhanger! I love, love, love Elizabeth. She's relatable and so REAL. The author does an amazing job portraying her mixed emotions about her novel being rejected. Chapter two is an absolute gem; love me a bad date story."

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Women’s resolve to stay single

"The author did a splendid job of painting each scene giving attention to every minute detail. The grammar is impeccable. The emotions are there. It’s a nice read till now and couldn’t wait to read some more"

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Woman's Resolve to Stay Single

"The author has great detail explaining character and setting, not to mention the great grammar and punctuation. The overall feel for the story is interesting and relatable (which is always a bonus!), I'm only a couple chapters in and I want to keep reading! Great job."

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Good

"I liked how she handled the Hayden situation. "

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