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Cute

"So meaningful. Thank you!"

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Loved it

"I loved reading this book. At the beginning where it mentioned Luna liking some of the boys but they didn’t like her back. I could relate to that the most. I’d recommend this book to Harry Potter fans "

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Friends, the best gift. ❤ Amazing story

"Really, This is the best Valentine's day ever. Just imagine a valentine's day turned to a friendship day. Then it is the best miracle in the world. Celebrating Valentine's day with gf/bf is too boring, and I had never felt that and I don't want to. But celebrating valentine's day with friends, it is an extraordinary experience. Luna made it. I now really miss my friends.Luna is lucky to have friends like them. I bet it will be the best Valentine's day in everybody's life. ❣ ❣ ❣ ❣ ❣ ❣ ❣ ❣ ❣ ❣ ❣ ❣ ❣ ❣ ❣"

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So Wholesome

"While I've never read Harry Potter, anyone reading this please don't come for me, this story was so cute and enjoyable for someone with really limited prior knowledge. Your main character striving to show love for her friends and celebrate friendship on a day long made to be about lovers and couples is so great to see, and a nice spin on it all. It's a way I think Valentine's Day should be celebrated in conjunction to its love hallmark origins. It flowed so well and she got her desired outcome. Anyone from a young kid just picking up the original series to a longtime fanatic could pick up this novel and enjoy what it has to offer. There were some minor errors, but it's a first draft and didn't detract much. Awesome job!"

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Short and Sweet

"This book is amazing for fans of Harry Potter, more importantly, Luna Lovegood. I am a big fan. So I love her. The grammar and writing style also doesn't have any problem. It is a short story, which is very entertaining. You love Luna Lovegood, and her personality you will love this. Just a piece of advice. Add chapters of them playing muggle games. And it will be more fun. Extend the book more. I know you will do it the best. :)"

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Simple

"The reason why I chose to review this book is because it's a short story, and I love short stories. This one was light and simple, which is not a problem at all, but lacked a few fundamental things: 1. Focus on the intention behind the story 2. A 'Wow' Factor The plot was centered around Valentine's day being inclusive of all kinds of love, and the main pairing in question seemed to be Ron and Hermione. I think showing the kind of fights they had (from Luna's perspective) then showing how they made up (here there's a lot of scope for some atrocious, comedic scenes) instead of just stating it in a paragraph would have given more layers to the story. Luna's own thoughts could be more expanded upon. I do not mean to say that the story has to be longer, but you could look for ways to add more depth to the characters' observations, commentary etc."

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