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Enjoyed this story

"There were few mistakes in your story but the plot and the character is awesome. I enjoyed reading this book and it kept me hooked. "

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Niceeee 😳❤

"Good story 👍 I like the concept and the setting. Your description is nicely written too imo. I mean it could be improved or added some more on certain parts but I think your writing style fits with the story's setting and pace. And I love the mystery vibe too, always love to see that in a story ❤❤❤ a few grammar/punctuation errors but nothing that can't be fixed :)"

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Well, I Was Sleeping

"The idea is beautiful! I really do hope that Lindsey kicks their ass and hopefully, gets everyone back to their own bodies! This is amazing!"

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Well I Was Sleeping

"I really enjoy the authors writing style. The first chapter pulled me in almost immediately. I enjoyed how the first chapter showed the readers the main character's personal life. A few grammar mistakes but those are easily fixed. 👍🏼👏🏼"

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off to a great start !

"This book is very good , and I do like and mystery and thriller once in a while . The plot and the authors writing style are very good . There are a few grammar mistakes but that's okay , we all do them . I will be looking forward for future updates ! . Overall , this is off to really great start , keep up the good work !"

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While I am sleeping

"Read on chapter and I am already hooked by it, it has great potential. Keep up the good work! -Katherine "

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Well I was sleeping

"I really like this story, as well as the authors writing style. Over all a really good read, there are a few gramma mistakes here and there but that’s to be expected, nothing’s perfect "

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