Jazmin

A man with no motive is a man no one suspects. Always keep your foes confused, if they don’t know who you are, what you want, they can’t know what you plan to do next - Lord Baelish

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Daddys Girl

I loved it! I fell in love with all the characters immediately. Though at the begging it was confusing because he told her to give him a _____ or get punished but later in the story after they simply kiss or when she asks to cuddle with him he was hesitant and he acted as if he could barely touch her. I don't know if that's the character development that you were going for but either way, the story was good.

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For Irison

It's confusing. The reader is not told the MC name at the beginning which confuses me and I feel no connection to the MC. After every chapter, I'm left with un-answered questions. Also, I don't think many of the big events are explained well enough I do however think that you are good at explaining the smaller events but still, that doesn't help much because I would personally rather have a really well descrpted large event rather than a smaller one.

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Dont Smile At me

It's a short cute love story.
Throughout the story, you're writing style is kind of hard to understand. The ending conflict was never clear. I feel like everything was rushed and as a reader, I didn't get enough time to experience the feelings that were playing out before a new one arrived. I was kind of bored throughout the story and I what have I asked for more action throughout the story. I would recommend this book to people that like shorter stories. Overall something that I did like what is the character

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Good start

I enjoyed the plot but there were a lot of grammar and punctuation errors that were not easily ignored. Moving aside from that you did amazing on the show don't tell method! I could picture everything that was happening to the MC.

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The cycle of emotions

I absolutely loved these poems! The emotion they hold is so strong. I love how you describe everyday emotions and connect them to real-world situations.

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When the dawn rises

I really enjoyed the beginning of chapter one ( Before 11 years later ) . After that I was a bit confused as to what was happening. Your writing style and grammar are great.

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Nario

I really enjoy seeing the story unfold - although I've only had the chad the chance of reading the first few chapters. The only thing id say about this is work on your grammar and use some words. Other than that this is a great book and I can't wait to read more. So far in the story I have a love hate relationship with him because I like the crazy but sometimes the psychopath in him is a bit showy - I don't mean that in a bad way I like that -

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My Half Damon

Really good start. The plot is interesting and makes me want to read more. Although something about some parts of the writing - maybe because in chapter one you're writing past-tense - and most of the dialogue make it hard to read. Maybe it's just my personal opinion but some of the dialogue sounds almost robotic.

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Diamond Bones

Really good so far! YOu are really good at the show don't tell method. I think you give just enough details to where it's not too overbearing. Also, your story immediately draws the reader in wanting them to continue reading. I will be waiting for an update.

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Running From The Shadows

Goos start. I really liked the beginning. This reminds me of a realism book because the characters are so relatable. Though as far as I read I couldn't see a specific place where the characters had a conflict where they could have some character growth. - Also a few grammar and spelling mistakes -

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The Harrowing

I dont usually read horror stories but immediately after reading the summary I was drawn to the story. I was not at all letdown. Your writing is amazing.

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Saved

Amazing grammar. I really like how you explain the girl's background in the beginning and the dark details included. Very intriguing. Your writing style really captures the reader's attention and has them wanting to read more to see what's next.

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New girl

Left a lot to be desired the ending was not up to par, did not go into details very well(or clearly), at the beginning, it seemed like the story would have a lot of potential( it could have maybe you can still cut if you rewrote it a bit)-

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Sweet Temptation

I absolutely love this story I could not put it down! It is one of my favorite books I've read I loved the emotional parts that made my heart ache I also loved how nothing was predictable. I was amazed by all the twists and turns. I am beyond happy that I was able to read this. I cant wait to read all your other work!

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Funny friendship

This was a really good short story! It was really funny and I immediately loved the MC. The character development was amazing too!

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A Love Which Was Never Meant To Be

-Ive read four chapters-
What I have read so far is really good. I will say that you could re-word a few things its nothing terrible but when reading I can't help but think that some words would fit better in some places. Overall I think the characters are easily liked and the chapters are short and sweet.

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Emma, The Road To Happiness

I absolutely loved this book! It was an amazing example of a real relationship and how they are never perfect. I loved all the ups and the downs. You did amazing showing and helping me feel the emotions of the characters. I loved crying and laughing throughout the story.

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Well I Was Sleeping

I really enjoy the authors writing style. The first chapter pulled me in almost immediately. I enjoyed how the first chapter showed the readers the main character's personal life. A few grammar mistakes but those are easily fixed. πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ

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Is this love?

- I have only had the chance to read the first chapter. -
Wow, this reminds me of a poem I read a long time ago! I really love this because it's so true! When we are so in love with someone the signs may seem obvious to the people around us but we stay oblivious, once that person falls out of love with us because even though it may not even realize what we are doing we are praying that they find their way back to us.

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Life: An Illusion

I absolutely love the authors writing style. I enjoy the poems at the beginning of every chapter. When reading the story I can sense the feeling of loss and despair. My heart swells at the thought of losing someone so close to me.

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Good

The writing style was really great. I enjoyed the diffrent povs. I was intrigued and ready to read more the whole time. The only thing id say you should work on is grammar and punctuation.

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You Are My Flame

Great start. Chapter one had me on edge of my seat. The only thing I would suggest is instead of V and J write the whole name it was a bit confusing.

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Dear Golden

I just read the first two chapters and they are good so far. The characters sound promising. I think that you described aurelia quite nice. Im excited to read more. :)

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The Sword Madien

I've read the first few chapters and I think you have a really good start. The story feels like a plot of a movie. The dialogue parts were great. You can almost feel the emotions that the characters are experiencing.

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Distress Alpha's Damsel Mate

Distress Alpha's Damsel Mate is looking to be a great book. I quite enjoyed Chapter 1. :)

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Brand New World

I really like Ava. She seems like a good person. I liked how as a reader I got to learn a lot about her even just throughout the first chapter. I think your descriptive writing is great. I liked your writing style a lot - other than some minor grammar issues - I usually like to read first person story but yours had me wanting to read on.

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Five favours

I like the story, besides a few grammatical errors and the dialogue parts the story is easy to read and It captures the reader's attention.

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Obey

I've only read the first two chapters. The author is amazing with words. Everything is described really well. I think the author is really great at the show don't tell method. This was one of those stories where I can easily picture the characters and the setting. I will continue reading.

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Ray Of Sunshine

I really like the story so far. I think that you describe the characters and their emotions well. I will happily continue reading.

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