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In The Water

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Summary

A short poem about the water.

Genre
Other/Poetry
Author
Jazmin
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

Underwater

The outside world is silenced

And my head is clear

Keeping my head under

Until my lungs begin to burn

I sink down

Releasing time

The silence breaks

As I reach the surface

My time here has ended

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author

Like the deep ocean...deep words❣❣❣

5 years
1
author

It is indirectly compared to some truth. like ocean is where we find peace and death too,. It can be compared to a person dying in his/her own world and time by time he/she dies
right??

5 years
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author

beautiful poem gal! I’m always a sucker for these deep poems that make my mind explode!🤯🤯

5 years
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