What is your opinion?
Haunting Dreams
"Lovely horror, macabre and well painted. The end is very well written and executed, gives a little information but leaves wanting more and a little... Which is a good thing :) You have my vote. In a similar vein to yours check out my story for the competition: The Chamber of Twisted Echoes. Please comment and vote if you deem worthy."
Not sleeping
"This is some nightmare on elm street style stuff."
Disturbing
"This really made me afraid to sleep. I love how you've veered away from the conventional "sitting on a virgin's chest" kind of demon, and replaced it with some horrible pale monstrosity. I'm also incredibly glad you spared the dog...I was petrified that it would be killed. Overall, a really creepy twist on an ancient legend. Job well done."
Nightmarish!
"Great story! I love how you draw on a creature from folklore, and you put a pretty modern spin on it by using technology; I think it makes the story scarier by using the thought that it could happen today. It kind of seems like an explanation for sleep paralysis, but that condition is terrifying itself. Anyways, great read! Good luck in the competition! :D Keep writing!"
