What is your opinion?
Well done !
"THis is amazing please write more"
Nice start off ^_^
"The quality of this author is formation of sentences. The sentences in this book are formed in such a way that they are both attractive and effective when the reader reads it. My attention was highly grasped by the introduction and summary of the story. But as the plot of the story is not clear yet, I would give it 4-star rating. Looking forward to more chapter ^_^"
Broken Wings
"Tags: Review Swap, Read to Chapter 4 (WIP) ^^Overall^^ I will take another look after a while, not much to work with for a review at this time. So this will be a "First Impression" type Review. Has a bit of mystery going on with some prophetic dark dreams our MC Miss Smith has been having. As of Chapter 4, the dream becomes a reality. ^^Pros^^ You could be going for Sci-Fi or Fantasy at this point in the story, as one hero enters into a house way ahead of the current tech curb for the area. The writing is fluid, and characters are easily discernable. A minor villain is introduced in Chapter 2, and he is somebody you can absolutely hate. ^^Cons^^ Still in the early stages being written, as the author stated so reformatting and corrections will happen to make the reading a bit easier. ^^Best Line^^ "Obviously, this was a mistake, I have to be going if you will please excuse me." - Miss Smith."
