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"A lovely young romance, which brings together the thoughts of 4 main characters as they struggle into adulthood. The build up is slow, but the tension racks up as one of them gets pregnant. It needs a bit of work on punctuation and paragraphs, but otherwise an extremely enjoyable read. It's not finished yet, so we can't fully see where the plot is going, but it coming along nicely. The characters are fresh and very natural, and also likeable which is rare. Dialogue is exceptionally good."
Very sweet
"Super cute and sweet, I love the characters and they had some amazing interactions. There were some grammar and spelling issues, and the author should break up the text (especially at the dialogue), but besides that, I really enjoyed the plot and the refreshing writing style. You have got talent! Just keep writing and editing! :) "
Cute Coming of Age Romance
"You can definitely feel the first love teen romance vibe throughout the book. It's quite wholesome. The book follows the perspective of multiple people in the high school as they kinda learn the ropes of dating and growing up. Definitely makes you all little warm inside. Chapters are short so it's a quick read!"
Makes me really fuzzy
"I love this book so far!!! It makes me fuzzy in the best way romances do. I’m also adoring the main characters so far :)"
Really cool writing style.
"While I'm not one for romance stories. This one seems pretty interesting. It's a puppy love story that takes a POV from all the main characters. Never seen anyone do that before really cool style. Each chapter changes perspective and gives the reader to feel what each character is feeling and thinking. Some context would go a long way I think. Like I'm assuming they are high school teenagers. But not sure exactly what age the mc's are. Regardless it doesn't take away from the passion you feel when reading. Very detailed and graphic scenes and a unique writing style that gives the reader a real POV for all mc's is awesome. Great job and keep it up"
I love it!
"This story is like a rollercoaster of emotions and events, there is never a time when the story is boring. It is so detailed, and the way everything is described is so pristine! The characters are so easy to fall in love and connect with, and the intimate scenes are phenomenal. The relationships and personalities in this story make me want to live in that world. The way that even the sad parts and the struggles are written is absolutely beautiful. I'm falling more in love with every chapter in the book and everyone should read it. It is a true masterpiece."
Great!
"This is great so far! All your characters are very well established and I can tell who’s POV were in each time it switches, so great job with that!! I think in terms of the writing style, play around with starting a new paragraph every time someone starts talking, I think that could help the flow, especially for the cute or quippy conversations. But I think you have something really good here! Great job! :) "
