Chapter Chapter 1 - Where am I? | The Forgotten Halls by Jerrod Wise at Inkitt
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The Forgotten Halls

Summary

Theodore wakes up in an abandoned building that he has never seen before. The rubble hides what dark events occurred when the place was left behind. Chased through the halls by a undead rabbit and daunting illusions. Will he survive?

Status
6yrs ago
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 - Where am I?

Theodore woke up in a daze with a feeling of sinking darkness inside him. He looked around the to see where he was, as he wasn’t familiar with any of his surroundings. “Hello? Is anyone there?” He exclaimed. He frantically searched for a door and was met with barricades on every inch of the door. “Mom! Where are you!?” he screamed, crying. Theodore sat in a mold infested office chair and cried for a few minutes. He got himself together and began to look around the room he was in. He saw a box sitting on the floor that was covered by a layer of ceiling tiles. He moves the tiles and saw that the box contained plastic toy heads and other body parts. Theodore investigated each of the items and saw that they were in pristine condition. He noticed some drawings on the window that depicted a rabbit and a bear. He looked at the desk and saw a set of 3 figurines covered in smut and dust. He wiped them clean and saw that two of the figurines resembled the drawings on the window. “This place is really weird” Theodore said as he finally noticed the Freddy Fazbear suit sitting outside of the door. He walked around the office and saw a ventilation system. He wondered why is wasn’t blocked. He walked out of the office, avoiding the moldy Freddy suit. He looked down the hall and almost fell down when he saw another suit, which was that of Bonnie the Bunny. He walked down the hall, feeling the walls, feeling an eerie feeling. “I don’t like this place. It smells and feels like death and torment.” He looked down another hallway and saw arcade cabinets. He smiled and hoped that they worked. He ran down the hallway and turned on the machine. “It works! I don’t know how but it works! This will be fun!”

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was just going through your fic and it had me wondering if youve ever thought of getting custom illustrations for your characters or scenes that you might wanna highlight could be a fun addition to your work as well

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