What is your opinion?
In disguise
"It's a interesting story. The plot is good. I like the way you have portrait each character. Maybe it's my personal opinion, but I think the way you structure your paragraphs are kind of confusing. Also, there are some punctuation errors which can be fixed easily. Good Luck!!"
A Masterpiece In Disguise
"It's strange to think that I'm the first person to review or comment on this work, it's fantastic! As the writer is from India, but I am English, there is a bit of cultural divide, choice of wording or certain customs. But the writing is so good, that within the first chapter that I stopped noticing it. She makes her characters so relatable, that they seem real, and you feel her protagonists anger or joy or shame. She even makes the villain/ex-husband a sympathetic character, which is a hard thing to do and deserves a lot of credit. Keep up the amazing work! Sofia."
