What is your opinion?
Its was good
"Loved it so far excited about the next wish it was longer "
Puppet for the twins
"Wow!! Loved it!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "
Be strong
"Even though they did not get so far as to taking her virginity they did abuse her and use her and in their own way they did rape her and they did it more than once forcing themselves upon her was vicious and wrong though this is only a story and the characters are more than likely just that. The reality of the situation proves that the person writing this must have gone through something similar or witnessed something similar to be able to write with such clear intent and such vitality. No one would ever want to experience anything like this and I cannot blame the reaction of wanting to escape and run away fear and fright and not knowing if it is safe to speak or tell the truth. When we face such problematic situations we should not have to feel this kind of compelling reaction we should always be able to speak out and those who we attempt to speak to should listen the fact that they refuse to listen and that they were domineering in the way that they were it proves that they themselves and require some serious control and help and that this poor girl may not be the only victim in the near future or even that she herself may have not been the victim and that there may have been passed victims and we just simply don't know about it. Let us never feel as if we cannot speak out we must always have a voice"
Nice stoty
"Go for it girl..."
Lilbit1976
"Good book. "
Twins
"Recommend for adults Punctuation and spelling was bad Story was not checked for spelling mistakes plot okay"
Good story
"Nice plot but the seemed a bit rushed and there are many grammatical error ....but the story it self was good keep it up "
Puppet for the Twins
"Some background on why the twins are like this would be very helpful or are they just mentally disturbed? Spelling and Grammar needs a LOT of work but the plot of the story is very good. Looking forward to reading book 2 to find out what happens. Just looked and there is no book 2.......yet?"
Hard to read
"Parts are very hard to read with lots of grammar and spelling and word errors"
It's a really dark story.....
"I didn't expected for this story to be so full of hate and violence"
The English is bad the story seems rushed , spellings are bad but overall it’s ok
"The story line is ok just seemed rushed and the grammar and spellings are really bad"
