What is your opinion?
wow!
"had an amazing time reading these 10 chapters of the book. would wait for updates. Loved the way things were described.^_^"
10 out of 10!
"I love the story line so far, even though I haven't finished it yet. This story is very well written and I love the way you write and make the characters relatable even though they are in a situation we will hopefully never be in. I give this a 10 out of 10!"
The Inventors-3rd Dimension
"Absoultely love the detailed descriptions present in the scenes and the characters involved. There is a wonderful flow to the story. The build up is really good making this a page turner. Fantastic!"
Good!
"I enjoyed the chapters I have read so far. I really like how quickly the story builds and how we get to see more of Giovanni and learn who he really is. Your characters are relatable and likeable. The first part of this story has a lot of tension. Especially the first chapter. I love how this is growing!"
I am hooked
"This is a very intense I am hooked and I love this story. Keep up the good writing! I love the writing style too."
Great start!
"I really enjoyed this book so far and I think it is off to a great start! The grammar and punctuation is good and the characters are really intense. I can't wait to read what happens next!"
Neat Work
"Criticism: The introduction of the main character should be more seamless, perhaps start the story with some action and then delve into the character's thoughts/motives. The opening scene is the most important part which draws the reader in. The high-tension scenes lack a punch sometimes. Maybe play with the italics, the sentence lengths and line/paragraph changing. There are times where you seem to tell and then show too. For example: 'I stiffened my posture; I didn't trust her' or 'I could now identify her characteristics. She was ancient; hundreds of wrinkles...' I feel like this isn't required; either choose to tell or choose to show. Overall: The writing style is well established, and it clearly improves with time; I thoroughly enjoyed the uniform paragraphs of appropriate lengths, they add to the cohesiveness of a story. All the technicalities feel researched and accurate. The imagery is good, easy to visualize. The plot itself is quick, and ever-growing, and the character's motives and feelings are clear. Good work."
