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Fallen Angel

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Summary

"c-come on k-kian p-please we have to keep g-going" she says in between deep breath as she leans against a large oak tree. "i-i can't, m-my l-legs they h-hurt, i-im scared" says the boy as he cries quietly. "I know baby but we have to." She says while bending down and kisses his forehead, *I'll be with you ever step of the way okay" She says caressing his cheek. "Promise?" He asks while his eyes grow glossy. "I promise" She says and grabs his hand; they start running hand in hand, ducking tree branches and jumping over rocks. Their breathing becomes unsteady and their legs start to gradually get weaker and weaker as they run for what seems like hours. *gunshot* The girl leaps over to Kian and shield his body with her own as they tumbling down the mountain. Blood dribbles down her pale white leg and she winces in pain. She slowly moves off Kian trying not to make a sound . She leans against a tree and she rips her long dirty white gown and ties it around her leg tightly. "s-shit" the girl says as she hears footsteps coming their way *p-please g-get up we h-have to g-go o-o-or they'll g-get u-us" Kian says quietly looking at the girl with tears running down his face and tugs on her arm to get her up. "Kian" the girl faintly smiles and her heartbeat starts to thump slowly, she reaches Kians cheek and wipes his tears away. "I love you"

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

IMPORTANT (kinda)

Heya Friends


This is like my first time writing a story so be aware that this book will most likely contain some grammar mistake and just errors in general. If so just leave a comment or something and i'd gladly fix it. I do have an editor and she's like hella smart. Shit even smarter then me and the best thing about it is she's my cousin so it's free whoop whoop.

Anyways I just wanted to let you guys know a little bit about me and my book. Well i'm only 15 I turn 16 in August; writing and reading is my passion I love to write and read different genres mostly fantasy and horror. I love anime yeah yeah I know i'm a weeb. LOL you should really watch hunter x hunter or one piece mmm highly recommended. Yeah I also have a very strong mind and passion for this book so stick with me okay ?

Now for the book, well it's a little bit of everything if i'm being honest. So there probably a bit of everything but don't worry i'll make it all come together. Anyways I can't really think of anything else right now but if you have any questions or concerns please let me know Ill try to reach out to you or make a comment about something.

Oh and the cover isn't my creation if you find out the creator please let me know. I'd love to give credit.
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