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The spooky mansion

Summary

Lets welcome you to the universe of paranormal activities. This story starts in an island named Vespuki island. The island is not a safe place at all but filled with horrors of paranormal activities. The existence of a ghost had an emotional reason behind it. The ghosts a re trying to kill all the people in London but there is a twist at the end because all there plans are getting flopped day by day the rage of spiciness is getting more spicy and red with hotness.. Want to read the twist. Just read the story. **Note**- This story is not at realistic.

Genre
Horror/Mystery
Author
NEIL
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
4
Rating
5.0 2 reviews
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

There was an enigmatic island name Vespuki. The island was filled with joy of paranormal activities where when once who entered the island would never return back, The most mysterious thing was that at night time one had to carry at least 10 torches to face the obstacle and walk comfortably. By 2019 this island had become the most haunted island in the world but no one dared to enter it. Once a paranormal investigator named Loraine reached the shore of the haunted island Vespuki to know what is making the island so spooky and mysterious. He did not entered the island but stayed on the shore. He tried to talk to the ghosts via black magic but it was all in vain.

Finally Lorraine decided to enter the island. He also called some of his friends who by profession were also paranormal investigator like him. He knew the fact by the time they reach the shore it would be night. He was a little petrified. He brought confidence in himself. At late night around 1 am his friends reached the shore with dozens of torches. Lorraine was successful in convincing his friends and making them confident. All of them entered the forest with great mighty. Lorraine and his friends entered the island with heavy load of torches and with special wording which only ghosts could understand that “we are not here to disturb you”. After few hours of walking through the muddy, sombre, claustrophobic and horrible forest filled with noisy bats they reached to a point where they found an old and haunted house. The house looked abandoned and lifeless. The house was filled with candle at the edges which made the house a little horrifying. One of the members in group requested to leave the place immediately and return back home. Lorraine insisted him to stay. He sat down and started to do black magic. This time he was successful in talking to one of the ghosts. He asked very calmly and with extremely pleasant voice “why what is the problem why are you haunting the place is there any problem and if there is please tell us so that we can sort it out”. The ghost answered in a very spooky and dangerous manner. The ghost said “Do you know what happened between 1939-1945”. Lorraine after thinking for a while replied “No”. The ghost replied with a voice with higher rage which stated that she was very angry “you don’t know because you had neither faced the consequences nor did you exist at that time. The ghost said all those foolish countries trying to make them the king of the world fought against each other and we common people with no crimes and no faults faced the severe issue of the world war 2”.Lorraine had now understood the entire situation. He interrupted the ghost and asked the ghost if there family had a deadly kill in the war. The ghost replied with a soft voice with tears under her eyes “we both got married in 1936, it was a love marriage and we both couple were blessed couples. We did not have hatred even if there was any quarrel. We sorted all our issues with love. After 3 years of marriage we had two children. We lived happily. In 1939 the world war 2 had just begun . We were staying in London. we thinking of our safety packed up our luggage and immediately loaded our ships and went to a country which was not a part of world war 2. We thought of going to Switzerland. In between of our travel a huge wave pushed us to the shore of this island Vespuki. In this island we found this huge mansion, we started living there. In 1942 a helicopter trying to reach London shot our both children which we could not tolerate and decided to commit suicide.” The ghost with a higher rage said “now we want revenge and we will destroy the entire world and do you know a fact this island rotates around the whole world. Actually if you consider this is not an island but a huge rock which has arose from the bottom of sea”. After hearing this Lorraine got scared and apologized for wasting their time. They rushed back to their homes and next day told the news to the whole world. Soon in few hours this news was known to the entire world. The next night Lorraine could see the the haunted and creepy mansion which he had seen on the island. He was pulled into the mirror and directly into the mansion where he was tortured by two children, one woman wearing white shroud with black eyes and red bloody lips in white dress and a tall man with no face. The next day a coffin came floating to the coast of London in which the people found Lorraine's dead body.

Note- This story is not at all realistic nor their is any island like that.

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