Chapter 1- Dead
I didn’t realize how painful death was, and you know, it hurts. The humans are at the top of the food chain but my own emotions struck me down like I was just a piece of dirt.
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Rachel Stark was a girl who didn’t think life was worth living because of the mental pain she had gone through, so she ended up turning to suicide... She woke up in an echoey abyss where a voice boomed and asked her questions, only to figure out she was being watched by many other helpless souls. She soon learned the after life was much different then people thought. There were many peoples souls living happily in the underworld, which people may think, “Oh an underworld... it must be hell” But it turned out to be different then that... After living a few years in the afterlife, secrets about her life came to her and she has an urge to get back to the live world... What secrets will she learn, and will she ever get back to the live world... ••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••
I didn’t realize how painful death was, and you know, it hurts. The humans are at the top of the food chain but my own emotions struck me down like I was just a piece of dirt.
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Lynn Phoenix: Great storyline. I'm praying it's complete since the last update was last year.
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Miriam: Ich finde deine Bücher einfach Klasse! Von der ersten bis zur letzten Zeile spannend und gefühlvoll geschrieben
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Emily012: Fiona’s fear and resilience shine brilliantly.
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Anita: Der Roman ist gut geschrieben. Grammatikalisch nicht immer stimmig und häufig werden nicht passende Wörter verwendet. Der Schreibstil ist in Ordnung. Interessant genug, dass ich die meisten Teile wirklich gelesen habe, nicht nur überflogen.
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LeonieTamina: Ein Buch von Frau für Frau, aber Frau würde sich manchmal wünschen dass auch Männer so etwas lesen würden. Die könnten ja was lernen *grins*
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PenPrincess: I loved everything about this book! All the twists and turns! All the advancements made where there are! Obviously being vague so I don’t accidentally reveal anything ! it’s MUST read!! Loved the plot development hehe 😉
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