Chapter 1- Dead
I didn’t realize how painful death was, and you know, it hurts. The humans are at the top of the food chain but my own emotions struck me down like I was just a piece of dirt.
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Rachel Stark was a girl who didn’t think life was worth living because of the mental pain she had gone through, so she ended up turning to suicide... She woke up in an echoey abyss where a voice boomed and asked her questions, only to figure out she was being watched by many other helpless souls. She soon learned the after life was much different then people thought. There were many peoples souls living happily in the underworld, which people may think, “Oh an underworld... it must be hell” But it turned out to be different then that... After living a few years in the afterlife, secrets about her life came to her and she has an urge to get back to the live world... What secrets will she learn, and will she ever get back to the live world... ••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••
I didn’t realize how painful death was, and you know, it hurts. The humans are at the top of the food chain but my own emotions struck me down like I was just a piece of dirt.
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