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All You Need is Immortality

"Moves along at a slow pace but is a good story. It definitely shows the shortsightedness of humanity "

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Mixed

"Is this book I have mixed feelings, debating if someone under 18 should read this? As without saying the words the umm it can suggest sexual content. And could they under 18 understand the sadness in this story? Yes to adult can good and evil."

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All you need is - Immortality

"After the first chapter you are suddenly hit by all those wanting ghostly questions we have asked in our mind throughout human life limited only by our soul. But here that is immeasurable. The style of writting is like a beutiful blossom that starts out closed and slowly opens and leads you down a path with many mirrors for the characters to look into and question. I fell into the novel and became the world created. The characters are beautifully true and undaunting. Read it. Written by a true philosopher. "

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All you need is- immortality

"It was amazing can’t wait for more :)"

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Creative writer

"Your story is amazing. You put your imagination into words so well . It has the potential to take the readers into a different world. I really like the Okinizeus, how badly he wants to live peacefull6vand attached with nature. Your imagination is truly next level. Loved it. Keep going "

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Time Capsules from Another Dimension

"From the story's blurb, you can already tell how imaginative and thought-provoking this story's going to be. I loved the pace, plot and the world! I'm awed with your knack for imagery - it was just too good. I hope this will get more attention in the future. The well-built characters and the dynamics of your world drew me in for the first few chapters. On top of that, philosophical conjectures that theorizes about the paradox of scientific breakthroughs - it can either alleviate mankind or destroy itself from within. Overall, a promising and memorable start of a scifi-adventure story on timetravelling and warped dimensions. Keep writing author! I can't wait to delve deeper to the world of Amber Tiger. I'm loving this so far, you deserve a five-star rating. :D"

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I loved it, it's amazing

"It is so exciting that it makes a person look beyond the limits and makes us admit that everyone can reach eternity where there is no place for fear, suffering and pain."

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really good book

"I have read it all and if I say it is amazing it would be an understatement....this book is amazing I mean this book has it all that I want... I just want to say good job author and please update soon I am waiting to read more.. I'll recommend this book to everyone...."

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All You Need is imortality

"I like how the story develops slow .The subject of Transhumanizm scares me and intriugue. I would Okeanazis ,i hope i said it right is an old soul .If the prospect of past life is viable ,it would make him someone who reincarnated so much.I like the idea of ethrenal life , not because death scares me , but put it in a inviroment where someone smart , unlike this situation where they made people superficial , someone could right their wrongs.Alto i love Echart Tole , i have some situations i would love to corect. But then again , as a person who grew up with semi religiusnes of my family i always though of eternal life as something scary and meaningless.I guess this book made question all this confronting aspect of myself"

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All you need is - Immortality

"The story really captives a reader's attention when it comes to reading the first chapter 👋🦋💕 It really excited you at a point you can't explain because the more you read it, the more interesting it gets ❤️💜❤️ I'll give the overall rating a solid 4/5 stars because the book is still incomplete 💜❤️💜 Okay so, moving on to the writing style ❤️🧡💛 This is just my opinion on how I prefer to read my storybooks so, you don't have to change your writing style or anything because of me 😄😁 Everyone is imaginative and really creative when it comes to writing 💛🧡❤️ However, it's just my opinion about writing styles 😁😄 I love it when an author doesn't do so many paragraphs 💙💙💙 I know it's probably easier to read if it had many paragraphs but I just prefer it another way 🖤🖤🖤 You've done a very good job at writing this book and I hope you'll complete the story as soon as possible 🙈💜 Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 🤗💞✨ -Kookie 🍪💕"

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